Hmm. You may be right there. I'll keep that in mind.
From: "Elliott C. Evans" <eeyore@xxxxxxxx>
Reply-To: Chrononauts <chrononauts@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
To: Chrononauts <chrononauts@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: Re: [Chrononauts] Welcome to the 24th Century!
Date: Wed, 19 Apr 2006 06:37:51 -0700 (PDT)
Robert P. wrote:
> Because calling Davey 100% artifical sounds better,
> even if it's not the case.
Well, if you want to take this into the realm of writing style,
then we're delving into something I'm qualified to be anal about. =^>
* Never use two adjectives when one will do.
* Qualifiers don't strengthen a statement, they weaken it.
* Numbers confuse people.
"First Artificial Human Created" is superior, in my opinion.
Then we get into philosophy. When it's *your* project, never waste
time rebutting honest criticism you don't agree with; just thank
the critics for their input, and change nothing! =^>
Elliott C. "Eeyore" Evans
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