I made a slight tweak to it, in order to tighen it up a bit
By the way... have you tried this variant, yet? Any general feedback on it? Do you think it's ready for prime time (i.e. not a Game In Dev anymore)?I haven't tried it, and likely won't have an opportunity to do so for quite a while. But it all sounds pretty straightforward. Whether it's "ready for prime time" depends on what that phrase means in this context. When I'm designing a game, it means "ready to show to a publisher", but that's probably not applicable here.