I'll agree that a change to "Each player takes" would work better than changing moves to move. They move in the direction that is chosen by the player of the card. However, left and right are both as subjective as next to. For absolute clarity, I would word it as direction of play or counter-direction of play. But, if you look at the card, adding the extra clarification will require a reduction in font size to fit it all onto the card, something I prefer to avoid if possible. ----- Original Message ----- From: Joseph Pate <jpate@xxxxxxxxxxx> Date: Thursday, October 11, 2007 5:14 pm Subject: Re: [Fluxx] Zombie Fluxx typo: Let's Shamble! To: fluxx@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > You beat me to it, Bill. Obviously I didn't even read the text > myself before sending a silly reply. > > I would go with "Each player takes" instead of "All players take"... > and in regards to where those zombies go, I would interpret it as > player's choice, since either the left or right player is generally > considered "next to you"... it's a gray area to be certain. > > -Ankhst > > > X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.1.0 (2005-09-13) on > lists.looneylabs.com > > X-Spam-Level: > > X-Spam-Status: No, score=0.0 required=5.0 tests=none > autolearn=disabled > version=3.1.0 > > X-Original-To: fluxx@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > Delivered-To: fluxx@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit > > From: Bill Barksdale <bill@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > > Subject: Re: [Fluxx] Zombie Fluxx typo: Let's Shamble! > > Date: Thu, 11 Oct 2007 18:39:37 -0400 > > To: Fluxx Discussion List <fluxx@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > > X-Barracuda-Bayes: INNOCENT GLOBAL 0.5000 1.0000 0.7500 > > X-Barracuda-Spam-Report: Code version 3.1, rules version > 3.1.30902 Rule > breakdown below pts rule name description ---- > ---------------------- --------------------------------------------- > ----- > > > > On Oct 11, 2007, at 6:02 PM, Scott Sulzer wrote: > > > > > Players (plural) is the subject of the line, even though there is > > > following text. > > > Players move something. > > > A player moves something. > > > Move is the correct usage, not moves. > > > > But then which person is next to all players? I think the > subject > > should be changed to "Each player". Although that leaves me with > the > > question of whether their creeper moves to the left or right.... > > > > -- Bill Barksdale > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Fluxx mailing list > > Fluxx@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > http://lists.looneylabs.com/mailman/listinfo/fluxx > > _______________________________________________ > Fluxx mailing list > Fluxx@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > http://lists.looneylabs.com/mailman/listinfo/fluxx >