Hi, Bill and Carol, Here are the typos I found: ....................................... Page 1, under "Title": adopted - adapted Page 1, under "Objective" and under "Materials": retile - reptile Page 4, last line under "Action Cards": with less than five players. - with fewer than five players. Page 8, in check list: GREENSNSAKE - GREENSNAKE ........................................ Other recommendations: Page 3 - Instead of Interjections, use Prepositions or Conjunctions. Page 1, "Creation Directions": When organizing the cards: include one each of every possible combination. ....................................... Best wishes on this fine project. Sorting, organizing, taxonomizing, grouping, differentiating, integrating...these are some of the most important functions of the human mind and are the basis of mathematics and the scientific method for understanding the world. Congratulations to you all for making these skills accessible to students in such an enjoyable way. -- Kate Jones -----Original Message----- From: edu-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:edu-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of William M. Reed Sent: Saturday, August 12, 2006 9:32 PM To: Looney Labs Education Discussion List Subject: Re: [Edu] Making Games Typos? Crap. I swear I checked that darn thing over and over. But, you're right. i found two more. How many did you find and where were they? >:-( Bill ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ William M. Reed St. Joseph Montessori School 933 Hamlet St. Columbus, OH 43201 614-291-8601 wreed@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ On Aug 12, 2006, at 5:43 PM, Carol Townsend wrote: Bill - this is REALLY well done! Can we put it up on the Looney Labs website? If so, I'd suggest also running in thru a quick spell check before we do - I noticed a just a couple of typos that needed cleaning up, and I want to present the best view of you to the world! I'm not sure when I can get it put up (most of our geeks are at Gen Con right now), but here's where a link to it would go: http://www.looneylabs.com/OurGames/EducationalIdeas/index.html this is so cool! Carol On 8/12/06, William M. Reed <wreed@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: In order to clearly explain my directions for converting Aquarius into an educational categorizing/sorting game, I needed several illustrations. I put the whole thing into a .pdf document and posted it to my website, which you can peruse at: www.wmreedfamily.net