The one comment on this that I have is that the little thing that
says "Tree" is a little hard to see, since it's small, on its side,
and in quotes instead of a box the way "This is the House" is. I'd
suggest putting it in a box, and maybe putting it below the diagram,
making the diagram a little smaller if necessary. Maybe make it say
"A Tree" instead of just "Tree"
Other than that, great job of responding to all of the suggestions,
and coming up with a nice little single-stash game. Good luck with it!
On Feb 6, 2006, at 6:50 AM, Andy Looney wrote:
Hi everyone! Thanks so much, yet again, for all the excellent
feedback! Once again, I've incorporated many of your suggestions
into my newest revision, and once again I've updated the webpage
with my latest version. And yes, once again, more feedback is
requested! And there's almost no time left at this point!
What's changed? I've re-written several clauses yet again,
including changes to the descriptions of Tip, Swap, Dig, rolling,
and dealing with gaps in the line. I've also emphasized a few
important words with bold italics, changed "GOAL" to "HOW TO WIN,"
and converted all the forwards & backwards to lefts & rights. But
for once, the rule for who goes first hasn't changed! I think I've
finally got one I like...
I'm really hoping this can be the final version!
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